I am translating for the songs of 枫叶情--重建灾区小学募捐义演

celina

I need help after my second draft.

billzhao

what is it? There are so many friends here who are willing to give you a hand.

寒月

post your draft here, a lot will help

celina

万水千山总是情
词:邓伟雄曲:顾嘉辉
' Y$ n& W- n2 J- j9 }莫说青山多障碍
8 t( e6 [/ O% m% }* d风也急风也劲
& @, |4 I2 C* \# a8 i2 N" {9 q3 Y白云过山峰也可传情
莫说水中多变幻
( f9 d6 h% D5 h6 S0 e水也清水也静
) Y+ w+ Z' [" o+ n; @柔情似水爱共永
未怕罡风吹散了热爱
万水千山总是情
0 _  X8 p9 j$ C# X聚散也有天注定
& q& I; y) @" k不怨天不怨命
但求有山水共作证
There is love everywhere
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5 A* K' \9 p, t; ]  u2 L# m' O1 a& aLook at the green mountain; however, you can not know it also can be a obstruction.
0 Q9 B! [6 ]- D4 E  m# pThe wind blow rapidly and strong in order to pass the obstruction and meet the beautiful cloud.
: @8 x5 G1 [* b; |, BLook at the peaceful lake; however, you can not know whether there is danger inside.
However, our love will help us to overcome every difficult to dive and find the treasure.
9 Y( z' K+ J0 nMaybe some failure will disappoint us.
9 m5 m; ?; _9 P4 x) }/ w+ {/ oHowever, there is love everywhere
Our love will help us to overcome every difficulty.
3 Y# X# u0 A' U! yIt is unpredictable that whether we can get together or not.
" k$ K) V% B8 |5 M# Y2 d+ V, K$ ]  UWe do not worry about too much future.
Let’s just enjoy this moment.

celina

阳光总在风雨后
4 A: N+ D4 ?0 W' c) ?人生路上甜苦和喜忧
& N* _* u+ R8 o6 }" [愿与你分担所有
3 T1 y# M& M/ s: |7 X难免曾经跌倒和等候
$ A/ f5 Z5 H1 E. I) V: T要勇敢的抬头
5 k8 P3 e* i  [2 o谁愿常躲在避风的港口
2 W' L; D, r; m2 @宁有波涛汹涌的自由
* m) w0 ^- u4 p! P1 d% H$ Z* z愿是你心中灯塔的守候
  W7 x4 X0 _7 b0 [' Y  T9 {5 n在迷雾中让你看透
阳光总在风雨后
( C! o7 g0 R9 I乌云上有睛空
" S, ^: a8 s- h5 u珍惜所有的感动
每一份希望在你手中
. T  l2 g7 g( b5 v阳光总在风雨后
$ k# p6 f: w7 V& X3 v1 G/ E9 J+ l' Z- }请相信有彩虹
- E; F9 t  U2 T! B- L- R风风雨雨都接受
  q6 h3 L9 E. ^0 O9 e$ B7 v' t我一直会在你的左右
There is always sunshine after raining
1 @& k) y/ ?* E6 p) b% O% FThere are happiness and sadness in life.
' r0 u# L% E( n8 B4 CI will share with you everything.
3 H) y4 N6 c$ v" u1 B! I5 \) N7 S: m* tIt is hard to avoid failure and the process of waiting for success.
+ G4 N, ]) _: w- ]* H# @We get together and bravely face them.
6 {7 d. U' E. Q5 bEveryone does not want to have a common life,
We prefer to have a challenge like a small boat travels in the sea.
I am willing to be pharos for you to show the right direction in the fog.
) `. E' b. G1 y' s0 ]* XThere is always sunshine after raining.
# U. b; z. [& _. }There is sun above the black cloud.
2 k& B( e& f4 f( r0 vPlease cherish every moment you are moved.
Take chance on every hope.
( `9 F, O( l$ B5 [- u3 `1 w7 P- eThere is always sunshine after raining.
We can just believe that there is rainbow after raining.
We will bravely accept every situation and deal with them.
I will always accomplish you in your life.

celina

让世界充满爱
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5 M) P/ ?9 S. }轻轻地捧着你的脸
为你把眼泪擦干
- O1 L* B* f6 c这颗心永远属于你
告诉我你不再孤单
: D+ \* u$ W& O. D* ^& g深深地凝望着你的眼
1 P3 L7 v; [2 ^* a$ k# i. t5 k不需要更多的语言
" ~: B0 E: Q: [# i# r+ `/ d紧紧地握着你的手
这温暖依旧未改变
我们同欢乐我们同忍受
0 y- R- a- Q! |我们怀着同样的期待
  u9 q; e6 Y7 v我们同风雨我们共追求
0 Q9 ?0 t  o& `9 ~7 N我们珍存同一样的爱
无论你我可曾相识
无论在眼前在天边
8 C) v3 B- `4 O1 D真心地为你祝愿
. Y  ?2 ^7 M4 S2 N- k) T  J: T祝愿你事事平安
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Let the world full of love
Gently holding your face, I wiped away your tears for you.
+ T7 n4 ?+ a/ n9 Q' m% `  }6 Y: ~4 S4 ]My heart always belongs to you; please tell me you do not feel alone anymore.
Staring at your eyes, you have already known my meaning without saying a word.
Tightly holding your hands, the warm of your hands still did not change.
3 g2 O4 }1 ^2 jWe share our joy with our stand with the same expectations. (?)
. h' H, t6 B/ M! z! |2 sWe have been face difficulties together and pursing with the same purpose.
We treasure the same love for both you and me.
, i/ ~& z$ L4 g& E8 UWhether we know each other or not, whether we have been in the same immediate horizon,
# C4 Q- b+ c6 @3 i8 ZI sincerely wish you are peace .

celina

明天会更好
$ {- @5 k/ ?, v9 k* }! r: s9 O轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
看看忙碌的世界
是否依然孤独的转个不停
* c  I) [* D/ v* p春风不解风情
" J: b; V, a  t5 E4 Y6 `吹动少年的心
让昨日脸上的泪痕
" Z' z) q* E& r# J% B: b随记忆风干了
抬头寻找天空的翅膀
. |$ o$ Y7 P) \候鸟出现它的影迹
7 d3 Z0 O' g0 {+ h, U带来远处的饥荒
无情的战火依然存在的消息
3 a; J2 n6 Q' \( I& ~玉山白雪飘零
" `! h0 |% ~2 K0 o* h, o燃烧少年的心
9 z2 Y" |0 }( H) ?0 y' l使真情溶化成音符
/ L0 ]% g$ N) ]2 {7 B* I; n倾诉遥远的祝福
1 Q% ^; k0 e, J& \9 t唱出你的热情
伸出你的双手
- ]. ?, f  g/ _让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
; e, ?. Y3 t3 ]/ I让我们的笑容
3 m' j5 R$ x3 ]6 I) v3 n充满着青春的骄傲
! d2 q  ?! @9 A' }为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
谁能不顾自己的家园
抛开记忆中的童年
谁能忍心看那昨日的忧愁
带走我们的笑容
青春不解红尘
胭脂沾染了灰
/ j. a8 p- o, v9 e* i) |" n( m让久违不见的泪水
滋润了你的面容
唱出你的热情
0 o. F# j% M. O7 I3 y伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
2 w" j1 Q6 d! V让我拥有你真心的面孔
' e. X, V3 a1 U! ]6 C7 v让我们的笑容
' e* M/ B4 M9 f$ u- O3 v充满着青春的骄傲
, [4 T; ?3 m# t$ y( w2 U为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
  e* x- d5 @1 C& s' K: B$ m; s看看忙碌的世界
: G. r/ }, f) b; \$ L是否依然孤独的转个不停
日出唤醒清晨
' H: w3 |. u0 }) N4 K4 g' z+ n! ?大地光彩重生
让和风拂出的音响
谱成生命的乐章
3 m3 D' j& S9 `  y. A) j4 l4 A唱出你的热情
伸出你双手
+ i9 ^, V' W' v4 q让我拥抱着你的梦
8 Z! s. F. y5 q' r- Z5 p% U让我拥有你真心的面孔
- k; N2 b3 L  D( ?让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
5 d( E/ V  @, O* b% F让我们期待明天会更好
: T$ F; ^8 x4 D( Z, D" wFuture will be better
  {4 ?& x" \( m6 g8 ]I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
. T, M8 ^. g: j% j+ T5 LAnd see the busy world whether the same as before.
: n" O% J9 [) Z1 B/ L+ s4 gI cried because the earthquake destroyed our hometown.
- A" J6 j: H3 U+ Z# N9 [6 P, W: JI looked at the sky and saw the bird flying from my hometown.
It told me the news of the hungry and disaster of Sichuan.
I live in Canada far away; however, I bless my hometown using my songs.
9 V+ s- I9 r' e% NLet’s sing with burning passions.
. x7 V: o& n% r  r# XLet’s shakes our hands with each other. (Let’s get together to overcome the difficulties)
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Everyone loves their hometown with memory of their childhood.
Nobody wants to see the disaster take away our happiness.
% A' R% h+ G$ L" [3 o' \We got together bravely to overcome every difficulties.
0 M3 _( x& Q7 B' FLet’s sing with burning passions,
Let’s shakes our hands with each other.
# V& f6 G0 h; e, T9 _  pLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
) z9 V8 m2 g3 Z' @Let’s have the same dream
2 L! r! }& T& F0 ILet’s sincerely bless people who suffered in this earthquake.
I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
And see the busy world whether the same as before.
; e# A" ~5 U" `% H& O& o  Z1 mI am crying because the news of Sichuan earthquake destroyed my hometown,
However, I know that the sunrise will come finally.
7 d* \& _% j. P  h And the mother earth will also renascence after the disaster.
* W9 b! m7 v2 `Everything will pass and have its new life. (Everything will recovery after the disater)
Let’s sing with burning passions.       
3 s2 Q  H2 l: z& e/ tLet’s shakes our hands with each other.
; V" ^1 p% v- P$ jLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Let’s hope future will better.

celina

Please give advice as soon as possible because they need be done before June16.