I am translating for the songs of 枫叶情--重建灾区小学募捐义演

celina

I need help after my second draft.

billzhao

what is it? There are so many friends here who are willing to give you a hand.

寒月

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celina

万水千山总是情
, q* ?& @- C' Y) t7 h词:邓伟雄曲:顾嘉辉
$ E3 O3 r1 K3 D+ w莫说青山多障碍
6 s% _7 {" f& R  E; I% S6 m' s  h风也急风也劲
0 Y: @3 c7 E/ z2 z白云过山峰也可传情
' ^: |  }( L2 z+ r. Z& J莫说水中多变幻
水也清水也静
柔情似水爱共永
3 }6 D5 R# Y$ \9 C" U' s  e7 ]2 [, e0 N未怕罡风吹散了热爱
2 D1 D2 Q* H5 Z9 a0 a6 S2 L万水千山总是情
: `6 t( |9 A9 Q# B' r聚散也有天注定
- l. l' B6 q* k7 k) y3 a5 J( J2 T不怨天不怨命
7 L; I! v: }- z$ R; f但求有山水共作证
There is love everywhere
Option1
. S- \3 {8 S8 }8 k! P# @Look at the green mountain; however, you can not know it also can be a obstruction.
The wind blow rapidly and strong in order to pass the obstruction and meet the beautiful cloud.
Look at the peaceful lake; however, you can not know whether there is danger inside.
However, our love will help us to overcome every difficult to dive and find the treasure.
5 W# q; c' m, r9 RMaybe some failure will disappoint us.
However, there is love everywhere
Our love will help us to overcome every difficulty.
9 \  l2 c/ T1 I1 R/ mIt is unpredictable that whether we can get together or not.
We do not worry about too much future.
Let’s just enjoy this moment.

celina

阳光总在风雨后
% E0 i% E7 U$ R; `- z人生路上甜苦和喜忧
愿与你分担所有
3 ^' J5 z/ y8 w  Y  }难免曾经跌倒和等候
4 Z5 G2 Q6 p+ @. M要勇敢的抬头
谁愿常躲在避风的港口
宁有波涛汹涌的自由
4 Q) ^% p7 r, g! L( `1 j, t愿是你心中灯塔的守候
# l4 t+ F! p, j' }在迷雾中让你看透
% _$ [7 W; U4 r' l阳光总在风雨后
! W" U) Y' Y1 h% S乌云上有睛空
& `7 k% W, Q% {) P珍惜所有的感动
' ^- Q9 M) k5 W每一份希望在你手中
+ p1 M6 H# C* g) ?阳光总在风雨后
6 _% y- M1 V# n请相信有彩虹
7 ]1 J3 M8 X9 m; F/ X$ D  A风风雨雨都接受
8 _. `. L1 T# e$ U2 v) H5 s3 A我一直会在你的左右
, l; [* F3 e. ~$ X  AThere is always sunshine after raining
There are happiness and sadness in life.
4 r& Q5 ^' c6 ]- iI will share with you everything.
It is hard to avoid failure and the process of waiting for success.
2 o6 u. X: h! jWe get together and bravely face them.
1 s9 a5 K  u2 A& n1 O+ {! {$ t* FEveryone does not want to have a common life,
We prefer to have a challenge like a small boat travels in the sea.
: L! M6 ^+ m$ b. ]% }I am willing to be pharos for you to show the right direction in the fog.
There is always sunshine after raining.
( p" A: g/ D( c5 u( ^0 gThere is sun above the black cloud.
Please cherish every moment you are moved.
$ `" n: z3 A) n+ L3 _0 J! VTake chance on every hope.
There is always sunshine after raining.
We can just believe that there is rainbow after raining.
" ]) \5 [8 l# m9 z4 G1 m; h6 `We will bravely accept every situation and deal with them.
6 C" W( I) R1 l6 X! m/ X" y0 D; P0 EI will always accomplish you in your life.

celina

让世界充满爱
# C2 p/ l% D" c3 u1 I, q3 D
" ]2 u$ K+ _! r0 ?* Y% K轻轻地捧着你的脸
  c5 R4 ?: d4 [. _4 v0 P* N5 ?6 b为你把眼泪擦干
这颗心永远属于你
告诉我你不再孤单
/ D. `& I8 ?$ Y; o- B9 l深深地凝望着你的眼
6 L5 X- _1 B# O1 d4 h不需要更多的语言
紧紧地握着你的手
" ~0 d7 E. X  S, u/ W这温暖依旧未改变
我们同欢乐我们同忍受
5 g8 F# w! e" Q0 g6 h4 b0 W9 i我们怀着同样的期待
6 v* M2 k: ?! M5 o我们同风雨我们共追求
( e8 ~3 l5 R$ o5 M6 A我们珍存同一样的爱
% l  Y+ u, k' q" e7 O* @& y无论你我可曾相识
无论在眼前在天边
真心地为你祝愿
( y* S: h% x& V/ p& r& O3 N祝愿你事事平安

8 `0 I; M: a4 {8 }1 TLet the world full of love
Gently holding your face, I wiped away your tears for you.
2 A, ^" A8 i, \# q: S' HMy heart always belongs to you; please tell me you do not feel alone anymore.
6 d. _) \5 A- J! r$ h1 l3 EStaring at your eyes, you have already known my meaning without saying a word.
Tightly holding your hands, the warm of your hands still did not change.
We share our joy with our stand with the same expectations. (?)
( ?; Y* {$ c4 r* T, LWe have been face difficulties together and pursing with the same purpose.
We treasure the same love for both you and me.
% U8 t0 G6 p/ f4 c' F6 L; U" M' [Whether we know each other or not, whether we have been in the same immediate horizon,
, c6 E( z. I9 A; r/ W; s5 @* B1 wI sincerely wish you are peace .

celina

明天会更好
轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
+ i( e& y7 u4 i) ^看看忙碌的世界
6 |4 [) }2 {2 s2 i/ S: @是否依然孤独的转个不停
春风不解风情
吹动少年的心
让昨日脸上的泪痕
8 q! v8 G5 n0 l- j+ a6 q随记忆风干了
5 r" V0 B) O' M7 ?5 e8 z1 l% @抬头寻找天空的翅膀
候鸟出现它的影迹
7 |1 m! P2 t, a" @; h, j- u带来远处的饥荒
7 |4 a" g8 j8 m6 d7 }无情的战火依然存在的消息
玉山白雪飘零
' w. m/ r/ s9 u燃烧少年的心
6 P, R4 x+ Y% J+ }; r/ T使真情溶化成音符
倾诉遥远的祝福
9 z" j. n1 A8 K/ ~( y* x2 t唱出你的热情
/ p2 \6 n# D0 u, W( r伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
7 w5 Q6 l, e* n0 Z" I( w; [让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
  s) X1 m8 P2 w2 ~& x# _% d充满着青春的骄傲
( G  Z5 Z- D: y% h为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
) A' X$ N( f: D# j4 p谁能不顾自己的家园
抛开记忆中的童年
! j8 J3 O( @0 P# ]5 `$ w( `- q2 [谁能忍心看那昨日的忧愁
8 l9 a. O0 w+ j带走我们的笑容
2 y  {! z  X, i4 _6 t1 i/ u- P青春不解红尘
胭脂沾染了灰
( \& O/ s4 b3 i% v1 q让久违不见的泪水
" M8 g4 j1 U" t9 K" p: P滋润了你的面容
唱出你的热情
伸出你的双手
" Q) U0 K3 N* D9 J' b: W$ Y让我拥抱着你的梦
- e! |% r5 ]  `0 H% R4 W让我拥有你真心的面孔
8 f8 s+ D+ l! y: X让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
6 |0 d6 r1 U% c) V( q8 s8 k" o1 F* k轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
看看忙碌的世界
- P/ r+ Q' ^- j- S9 N. Z  M/ m是否依然孤独的转个不停
! J! ^+ T# c: I. I日出唤醒清晨
" s( m0 Z& p& D0 Y大地光彩重生
7 Z  G. }9 a" b2 s让和风拂出的音响
/ i, c$ e; T' {, Q) E0 h谱成生命的乐章
唱出你的热情
6 X0 w# a. |+ @# ~, f" b伸出你双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
1 G! a* J! Q3 O4 T% E让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
9 n" c: ~0 q& ?5 w充满着青春的骄傲
让我们期待明天会更好
9 Q" ^  [7 E2 F. ]; O) r+ y7 dFuture will be better
I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
And see the busy world whether the same as before.
! O" {& i! o0 G  ZI cried because the earthquake destroyed our hometown.
I looked at the sky and saw the bird flying from my hometown.
It told me the news of the hungry and disaster of Sichuan.
( u9 F1 D2 `/ }: XI live in Canada far away; however, I bless my hometown using my songs.
0 O  p! H+ O1 @" nLet’s sing with burning passions.
- A( n, d) j( Q) v( |7 a+ O/ pLet’s shakes our hands with each other. (Let’s get together to overcome the difficulties)
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
" j4 s$ V, i" o: ~' `9 [" zEveryone loves their hometown with memory of their childhood.
Nobody wants to see the disaster take away our happiness.
5 @/ ]* A7 W* p/ |7 T& ?" mWe got together bravely to overcome every difficulties.
Let’s sing with burning passions,
Let’s shakes our hands with each other.
+ X' j# ^0 @, T- I# H# U# ?Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Let’s have the same dream
) K0 D$ w: m1 q/ }! i3 e- V0 B$ ELet’s sincerely bless people who suffered in this earthquake.
$ Y- T5 n' j# ^9 f+ |I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
: ]/ I" r* ~  m2 }+ v% E; U% {And see the busy world whether the same as before.
I am crying because the news of Sichuan earthquake destroyed my hometown,
8 t. B; a* F& Q) ?  b4 `( ?However, I know that the sunrise will come finally.
And the mother earth will also renascence after the disaster.
: ?$ ]4 Y7 w# O6 XEverything will pass and have its new life. (Everything will recovery after the disater)
9 {4 a& j! M$ f: S* I  l! lLet’s sing with burning passions.       
Let’s shakes our hands with each other.
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
: |  y) ^# e1 Z% J% G0 ~8 ZLet’s hope future will better.

celina

Please give advice as soon as possible because they need be done before June16.