I am translating for the songs of 枫叶情--重建灾区小学募捐义演

celina

I need help after my second draft.

billzhao

what is it? There are so many friends here who are willing to give you a hand.

寒月

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celina

万水千山总是情
: x* D, I" Z* S4 n+ ^9 f) [4 |词:邓伟雄曲:顾嘉辉
8 ^4 U6 I1 `4 V& N8 F) l/ |/ j$ d4 A莫说青山多障碍
风也急风也劲
白云过山峰也可传情
" e$ A  O3 s$ B( h! X* m莫说水中多变幻
- h2 k+ J* h$ h- ]4 [2 T; r7 A水也清水也静
6 ^- ?. s8 e2 w( \- o8 I2 v柔情似水爱共永
未怕罡风吹散了热爱
万水千山总是情
聚散也有天注定
不怨天不怨命
* Z% w5 K  u/ e" {2 s但求有山水共作证
There is love everywhere
Option1
Look at the green mountain; however, you can not know it also can be a obstruction.
The wind blow rapidly and strong in order to pass the obstruction and meet the beautiful cloud.
* f* K* ^% j- N' u& F! [7 ALook at the peaceful lake; however, you can not know whether there is danger inside.
However, our love will help us to overcome every difficult to dive and find the treasure.
Maybe some failure will disappoint us.
However, there is love everywhere
Our love will help us to overcome every difficulty.
It is unpredictable that whether we can get together or not.
/ H" h9 h$ ^- U; {" yWe do not worry about too much future.
Let’s just enjoy this moment.

celina

阳光总在风雨后
+ d: h) i5 n/ v7 h7 M- H2 u8 w人生路上甜苦和喜忧
愿与你分担所有
难免曾经跌倒和等候
要勇敢的抬头
( t8 R; i$ ^! b, k# A+ `& \谁愿常躲在避风的港口
% X, g+ I5 D, ~6 [8 @; ]$ D  D宁有波涛汹涌的自由
& ]" ^" o; n4 ^9 V愿是你心中灯塔的守候
在迷雾中让你看透
阳光总在风雨后
. \) M- a3 D* Q- ]8 ~% J乌云上有睛空
珍惜所有的感动
# ?; c! T8 {% C: v: k" U每一份希望在你手中
* K6 o3 Q. s- y; S  k8 N3 r阳光总在风雨后
5 ?/ f7 C/ y6 K  Z请相信有彩虹
6 `# c5 N' Z7 m) R1 P$ M7 h2 Q4 [风风雨雨都接受
我一直会在你的左右
9 o2 T5 [# a: i1 B9 K0 gThere is always sunshine after raining
There are happiness and sadness in life.
6 ~3 [( K6 f  M0 R: m7 k, `I will share with you everything.
6 v1 I% f2 Y& _7 dIt is hard to avoid failure and the process of waiting for success.
. `, W$ a  @5 jWe get together and bravely face them.
; Q; i6 o5 G  f7 nEveryone does not want to have a common life,
We prefer to have a challenge like a small boat travels in the sea.
- _" `% E7 f0 F/ K+ [& iI am willing to be pharos for you to show the right direction in the fog.
( L: J: q$ G; tThere is always sunshine after raining.
There is sun above the black cloud.
/ [- T/ X# U3 |' zPlease cherish every moment you are moved.
Take chance on every hope.
There is always sunshine after raining.
% C7 F0 j* p- {6 zWe can just believe that there is rainbow after raining.
, ]2 S8 t: V8 W4 m/ RWe will bravely accept every situation and deal with them.
+ |# N$ r, _" [# d/ t# A0 kI will always accomplish you in your life.

celina

让世界充满爱

轻轻地捧着你的脸
0 U6 ]5 q' S, F  R! e1 a! g& D0 ?为你把眼泪擦干
$ f3 ]4 n! K  Q* S. T这颗心永远属于你
' r8 T. O  g/ r, G8 h+ k告诉我你不再孤单
深深地凝望着你的眼
; s: j1 I! o/ H不需要更多的语言
: L. I' P! a* ~2 \9 o8 l$ Z9 Z紧紧地握着你的手
( p+ N- M# Z& V: S7 B这温暖依旧未改变
我们同欢乐我们同忍受
8 {7 F) L& @8 M) r我们怀着同样的期待
我们同风雨我们共追求
我们珍存同一样的爱
无论你我可曾相识
+ ?8 W1 ?: C# b! x无论在眼前在天边
真心地为你祝愿
祝愿你事事平安

# r! ?, [' y8 B5 g$ sLet the world full of love
Gently holding your face, I wiped away your tears for you.
My heart always belongs to you; please tell me you do not feel alone anymore.
Staring at your eyes, you have already known my meaning without saying a word.
3 X# v. p% }. Y* \3 tTightly holding your hands, the warm of your hands still did not change.
We share our joy with our stand with the same expectations. (?)
- j" R; P% U' Q2 O1 tWe have been face difficulties together and pursing with the same purpose.
We treasure the same love for both you and me.
Whether we know each other or not, whether we have been in the same immediate horizon,
I sincerely wish you are peace .

celina

明天会更好
轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
! k7 M5 k. \" ]2 G慢慢张开你的眼睛
看看忙碌的世界
5 e% y! b) p% N% Y8 s4 W是否依然孤独的转个不停
+ }& y: r) c8 P# r春风不解风情
吹动少年的心
让昨日脸上的泪痕
  H- m: ]5 t/ y4 x! v随记忆风干了
7 W0 j0 u1 |5 A* |# B2 G' f抬头寻找天空的翅膀
2 W" R# r5 ~: `. L5 p候鸟出现它的影迹
带来远处的饥荒
6 W$ A5 Z4 Y. Q; A无情的战火依然存在的消息
玉山白雪飘零
) K; Z6 C9 z0 y& q+ [  A; X燃烧少年的心
使真情溶化成音符
倾诉遥远的祝福
" |* V; T# u2 m/ M唱出你的热情
伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
+ N# }3 {6 K3 p6 @, \让我们的笑容
+ F" f$ Z) Q7 ~" u0 @: X充满着青春的骄傲
8 L6 G1 ]+ D2 g3 k为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
谁能不顾自己的家园
抛开记忆中的童年
谁能忍心看那昨日的忧愁
带走我们的笑容
青春不解红尘
, v6 i3 N# a+ R: p胭脂沾染了灰
/ L5 H! A5 x, n/ d+ R让久违不见的泪水
滋润了你的面容
, m- \# g- Y' |% i- b3 C: J唱出你的热情
3 b" m3 f8 H0 t( L0 p" x- |8 z2 y伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
, N* E" e4 @! w# A; g1 F( i让我们的笑容
  C- G$ F- j1 m充满着青春的骄傲
为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
+ l  f* ^! g1 l  a# D, Q7 H: h4 \0 E轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
0 [+ ^+ ]9 w1 J: I慢慢张开你的眼睛
& K4 L" @7 U+ }/ I* |, q7 S0 V看看忙碌的世界
# {8 H. k. N! q是否依然孤独的转个不停
! V, s5 a. t. F. L7 ^' |1 Y日出唤醒清晨
7 p3 V* G8 n  o0 Y' }; a大地光彩重生
$ V1 }9 J6 d& y( G- X让和风拂出的音响
谱成生命的乐章
0 _7 }& [8 e6 f$ B唱出你的热情
/ G7 ~& }6 W7 j9 c  h) m伸出你双手
7 W- v2 l' f- d$ T4 i- Y让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
0 W3 p) F( D* n, ?' v1 }充满着青春的骄傲
让我们期待明天会更好
* U8 [4 z7 Y0 `: O& d! F0 ?7 @Future will be better
I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
And see the busy world whether the same as before.
4 f6 A" @) d3 f2 j  ]( cI cried because the earthquake destroyed our hometown.
I looked at the sky and saw the bird flying from my hometown.
It told me the news of the hungry and disaster of Sichuan.
I live in Canada far away; however, I bless my hometown using my songs.
, d; k8 _' u: v9 n; [  A6 MLet’s sing with burning passions.
Let’s shakes our hands with each other. (Let’s get together to overcome the difficulties)
& v7 _5 d( ^% \& c8 T; a  F$ }" gLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
. r8 l, O2 o& lEveryone loves their hometown with memory of their childhood.
Nobody wants to see the disaster take away our happiness.
$ D- L7 Z8 A/ l8 d3 _We got together bravely to overcome every difficulties.
Let’s sing with burning passions,
6 r8 E& @4 A% _9 y9 I" }) O7 @Let’s shakes our hands with each other.
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
4 f; v5 w6 U, D* k) m3 ULet’s have the same dream
( r2 W: Z8 C. e7 \9 M) ]Let’s sincerely bless people who suffered in this earthquake.
0 S! Z. M# Y1 Y% P" l# e3 P) dI woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
+ }- H; |3 W8 AAnd see the busy world whether the same as before.
I am crying because the news of Sichuan earthquake destroyed my hometown,
5 s8 i* y! T6 wHowever, I know that the sunrise will come finally.
, }5 z8 L0 Q  n/ Z3 L: l# B! O And the mother earth will also renascence after the disaster.
" J0 `- V* i: W% P" x+ j. `5 UEverything will pass and have its new life. (Everything will recovery after the disater)
Let’s sing with burning passions.       
- [' d0 h8 H+ a/ w5 ~6 @" y& xLet’s shakes our hands with each other.
5 G4 n% y+ r9 u; G& v+ E# RLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Let’s hope future will better.

celina

Please give advice as soon as possible because they need be done before June16.