I am translating for the songs of 枫叶情--重建灾区小学募捐义演

celina

I need help after my second draft.

billzhao

what is it? There are so many friends here who are willing to give you a hand.

寒月

post your draft here, a lot will help

celina

万水千山总是情
词:邓伟雄曲:顾嘉辉
莫说青山多障碍
- N4 ~$ H: q2 `' A7 F2 D; T; c风也急风也劲
7 B. x9 {* U# \6 F白云过山峰也可传情
莫说水中多变幻
# F& V: \# c; H1 ]水也清水也静
柔情似水爱共永
未怕罡风吹散了热爱
万水千山总是情
聚散也有天注定
6 a/ {' k! C7 l/ {8 V1 q2 E不怨天不怨命
但求有山水共作证
4 e6 w8 _6 Y$ w3 L/ mThere is love everywhere
, W) z( ?, r% n* n, w; ^) i$ oOption1
; o  _, {6 A1 T" V6 ~Look at the green mountain; however, you can not know it also can be a obstruction.
2 `8 f. @5 R' C( I9 k+ QThe wind blow rapidly and strong in order to pass the obstruction and meet the beautiful cloud.
) e$ d4 r9 i1 e+ {Look at the peaceful lake; however, you can not know whether there is danger inside.
However, our love will help us to overcome every difficult to dive and find the treasure.
, d3 T! H, T) @& \2 PMaybe some failure will disappoint us.
9 @  j/ x5 m) F- W: P3 r% GHowever, there is love everywhere
Our love will help us to overcome every difficulty.
It is unpredictable that whether we can get together or not.
& o! t6 X$ p+ U& K$ x* C/ ]" qWe do not worry about too much future.
# W' Z( K! w( z5 k4 [" VLet’s just enjoy this moment.

celina

阳光总在风雨后
人生路上甜苦和喜忧
3 z7 m0 s. u; X# W3 o  G! [愿与你分担所有
" e5 H7 q8 H: k- C5 }% \难免曾经跌倒和等候
$ G, M, Q% [4 h: \5 g$ S! Y  H, z要勇敢的抬头
谁愿常躲在避风的港口
0 c( V0 e2 d; G- z. |9 c宁有波涛汹涌的自由
5 m2 h' p- j. e- S9 D. X: y0 a6 A( o( `% [愿是你心中灯塔的守候
在迷雾中让你看透
9 r. g) A/ ]$ u- @9 {阳光总在风雨后
乌云上有睛空
, x# _* ?  Z- f% |珍惜所有的感动
每一份希望在你手中
阳光总在风雨后
请相信有彩虹
% ]- Q& h) a8 D, _/ F4 {风风雨雨都接受
7 t( }1 o. s6 C3 S& {5 Q+ K/ H, W我一直会在你的左右
4 g4 n/ M, t$ ^! L& hThere is always sunshine after raining
There are happiness and sadness in life.
I will share with you everything.
+ U* |$ L; s, XIt is hard to avoid failure and the process of waiting for success.
We get together and bravely face them.
9 h: p- H& u; B7 gEveryone does not want to have a common life,
' o) \! u+ D; A- f, wWe prefer to have a challenge like a small boat travels in the sea.
& E% O7 t& b& e6 y% R/ vI am willing to be pharos for you to show the right direction in the fog.
4 l' R0 N/ ]8 T( NThere is always sunshine after raining.
: z  R6 L2 \0 J* zThere is sun above the black cloud.
4 c: j( V+ H) b1 M0 b$ n$ l! PPlease cherish every moment you are moved.
Take chance on every hope.
2 _# K' R! G- T& D# ]4 QThere is always sunshine after raining.
. \: |) Y) C1 a( ], a! y. M9 X6 hWe can just believe that there is rainbow after raining.
We will bravely accept every situation and deal with them.
5 @9 ]1 @9 D$ e3 H* ?1 ZI will always accomplish you in your life.

celina

让世界充满爱

  L: Q7 W- |+ F8 y轻轻地捧着你的脸
, Q. s, E# B" Y8 ]" V& B  _; c为你把眼泪擦干
1 |- u9 f* T- z4 i这颗心永远属于你
) Z: ?3 o& |% q: S$ I4 r告诉我你不再孤单
8 p. z1 o+ Z3 T- a深深地凝望着你的眼
6 w3 l! ]9 y3 |4 D# C; t不需要更多的语言
" j. w: `! _) h' a' _2 j/ D紧紧地握着你的手
& Z! M# J- l+ p! I/ M- T0 P这温暖依旧未改变
) r$ z6 M& R5 U4 F$ P我们同欢乐我们同忍受
- `2 V3 ^* R7 @我们怀着同样的期待
/ |5 P. B- {$ e9 y: a' b; k我们同风雨我们共追求
我们珍存同一样的爱
# m, x! E  U* `无论你我可曾相识
, x# M. }9 d$ ?! h无论在眼前在天边
1 W! e5 z" A- }, A真心地为你祝愿
0 V. {; m9 }( C+ n祝愿你事事平安
$ f! Q8 D# G. ]2 ^
8 ^: g0 e7 D7 g1 h3 GLet the world full of love
Gently holding your face, I wiped away your tears for you.
My heart always belongs to you; please tell me you do not feel alone anymore.
; S0 X" O2 e# cStaring at your eyes, you have already known my meaning without saying a word.
# j5 ?4 `% K5 J' s9 ?9 X- UTightly holding your hands, the warm of your hands still did not change.
We share our joy with our stand with the same expectations. (?)
. c5 m2 z, ^5 n+ L6 J! _We have been face difficulties together and pursing with the same purpose.
We treasure the same love for both you and me.
/ K) Z+ `1 ?: o7 tWhether we know each other or not, whether we have been in the same immediate horizon,
I sincerely wish you are peace .

celina

明天会更好
轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
" @! `" }% X  C) F7 m) `) x$ K看看忙碌的世界
; k$ O: a( `# ?& J1 S9 [+ N# m4 d是否依然孤独的转个不停
! Q# z8 }6 c* q4 R春风不解风情
吹动少年的心
让昨日脸上的泪痕
随记忆风干了
$ {: h6 H# Z5 N* [1 R$ u抬头寻找天空的翅膀
1 g' I+ E8 `1 L1 A3 a候鸟出现它的影迹
带来远处的饥荒
9 H8 l% |8 `! [) r$ ~# K6 H' b( D无情的战火依然存在的消息
玉山白雪飘零
9 H) O3 j. p" n. v# @0 ^燃烧少年的心
使真情溶化成音符
' K7 N7 v5 U2 B, H/ d  ?倾诉遥远的祝福
唱出你的热情
0 r& Q  i* q8 f) u" l. j7 x; c伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
- P! {/ b2 @/ [" A* X  c9 W充满着青春的骄傲
为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
谁能不顾自己的家园
& Y* Y  t, ]8 `2 z抛开记忆中的童年
9 _7 X8 \# o9 ?4 F. ^% r2 y谁能忍心看那昨日的忧愁
带走我们的笑容
青春不解红尘
胭脂沾染了灰
$ |- B# a5 Q2 r: R$ }& Z让久违不见的泪水
# O; ]6 o7 H& s0 X滋润了你的面容
5 q) I8 e5 G5 P4 }5 V* L3 C! u唱出你的热情
伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
3 N2 V& r; m& o1 }: v* P让我们的笑容
, Z# X8 ~6 e! }& x% |3 Y: j充满着青春的骄傲
为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
3 m, U8 P  ?* g6 O- [( ~, V轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
7 r- q6 s$ _% a+ B& `$ j慢慢张开你的眼睛
看看忙碌的世界
是否依然孤独的转个不停
日出唤醒清晨
大地光彩重生
1 K- V% M% A" p, W1 ~9 [让和风拂出的音响
4 ?  E- \6 Z, k4 I: q3 I谱成生命的乐章
唱出你的热情
伸出你双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
4 P) b1 Z5 [  a7 l$ p3 M/ Q5 i让我们期待明天会更好
& x( P! F0 b1 o: P3 v% C9 U1 GFuture will be better
: Q* {7 g' m  `. c& o) KI woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
* u1 {# p1 X3 E4 }# VAnd see the busy world whether the same as before.
I cried because the earthquake destroyed our hometown.
3 M* j! o' y5 H" Z8 a. Z# C* jI looked at the sky and saw the bird flying from my hometown.
It told me the news of the hungry and disaster of Sichuan.
I live in Canada far away; however, I bless my hometown using my songs.
Let’s sing with burning passions.
. g8 M3 O; Y! a: V( lLet’s shakes our hands with each other. (Let’s get together to overcome the difficulties)
7 {2 ?# j# D/ q9 k+ a" W. c) oLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Everyone loves their hometown with memory of their childhood.
5 P, F: L7 s: R3 S4 _" S$ vNobody wants to see the disaster take away our happiness.
: B# b" |$ B4 e. }" M" K8 H9 BWe got together bravely to overcome every difficulties.
Let’s sing with burning passions,
Let’s shakes our hands with each other.
3 Q/ t) _: u2 n; p& ~0 b: ZLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Let’s have the same dream
Let’s sincerely bless people who suffered in this earthquake.
I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
/ f; k  W% U% LAnd see the busy world whether the same as before.
2 j1 ~8 ?! N1 B5 qI am crying because the news of Sichuan earthquake destroyed my hometown,
6 k8 E4 j7 t9 T8 a" ~2 k7 cHowever, I know that the sunrise will come finally.
And the mother earth will also renascence after the disaster.
. s4 |1 u! M$ j2 ZEverything will pass and have its new life. (Everything will recovery after the disater)
Let’s sing with burning passions.       
. g1 l1 u) k" X0 \8 m) WLet’s shakes our hands with each other.
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
6 J3 e8 \9 v7 @0 uLet’s hope future will better.

celina

Please give advice as soon as possible because they need be done before June16.