I am translating for the songs of 枫叶情--重建灾区小学募捐义演

celina

I need help after my second draft.

billzhao

what is it? There are so many friends here who are willing to give you a hand.

寒月

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celina

万水千山总是情
; ~9 u; R- a6 o词:邓伟雄曲:顾嘉辉
莫说青山多障碍
' J8 K+ b' D+ n  g风也急风也劲
- \" |: P9 a! q- W( F1 n白云过山峰也可传情
$ R6 Y/ ?  E. e5 H6 M莫说水中多变幻
水也清水也静
0 }, a7 _6 T, b% ~7 ?5 `, \" d6 s/ K柔情似水爱共永
未怕罡风吹散了热爱
万水千山总是情
聚散也有天注定
不怨天不怨命
; I, C+ W* d* _6 i但求有山水共作证
( x! h2 z. O+ G1 N. tThere is love everywhere
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Look at the green mountain; however, you can not know it also can be a obstruction.
1 _. i  k+ w. e8 b* Q+ D6 OThe wind blow rapidly and strong in order to pass the obstruction and meet the beautiful cloud.
$ W, V4 U" o+ {9 X& q: |Look at the peaceful lake; however, you can not know whether there is danger inside.
However, our love will help us to overcome every difficult to dive and find the treasure.
4 X2 z: |5 V# j1 m- T4 J3 F/ U* D3 XMaybe some failure will disappoint us.
However, there is love everywhere
; i+ ^/ s8 T0 i  G  }; ?Our love will help us to overcome every difficulty.
* r: `- V  I% ?' G2 p. p  AIt is unpredictable that whether we can get together or not.
We do not worry about too much future.
Let’s just enjoy this moment.

celina

阳光总在风雨后
人生路上甜苦和喜忧
愿与你分担所有
; H% M: Z% @  ~5 c难免曾经跌倒和等候
* a$ Y& f! N, i" ~% W. Y要勇敢的抬头
& `7 [" r' I% a谁愿常躲在避风的港口
( z, d$ _2 @& R2 M8 Q) A宁有波涛汹涌的自由
愿是你心中灯塔的守候
在迷雾中让你看透
阳光总在风雨后
乌云上有睛空
珍惜所有的感动
) _4 I3 A5 V9 [; {1 X! Z' i% X每一份希望在你手中
阳光总在风雨后
) l+ y) N5 O# [& u7 ]5 D* t; @3 k/ S请相信有彩虹
风风雨雨都接受
我一直会在你的左右
3 I8 k$ ^/ G7 m: lThere is always sunshine after raining
" {, p& Q8 D- L7 d, E0 qThere are happiness and sadness in life.
) D. b# H2 N" PI will share with you everything.
2 ~$ l( |/ q4 m/ ]7 P+ `It is hard to avoid failure and the process of waiting for success.
! d; }% U$ p4 _5 uWe get together and bravely face them.
$ r# K$ S; j& S) U3 vEveryone does not want to have a common life,
( m+ C  ]  Y0 \- VWe prefer to have a challenge like a small boat travels in the sea.
I am willing to be pharos for you to show the right direction in the fog.
There is always sunshine after raining.
There is sun above the black cloud.
# M: Y6 N7 ~% hPlease cherish every moment you are moved.
Take chance on every hope.
; }+ H# A" W2 \) y; WThere is always sunshine after raining.
We can just believe that there is rainbow after raining.
We will bravely accept every situation and deal with them.
. m7 a8 B8 b. ^0 c6 e  U9 E/ KI will always accomplish you in your life.

celina

让世界充满爱
6 r' V3 v3 q8 t% I
轻轻地捧着你的脸
为你把眼泪擦干
4 @7 [6 V8 K, t3 A6 i  o# e4 ?7 N# n6 `这颗心永远属于你
告诉我你不再孤单
深深地凝望着你的眼
: S; c, u- i% U8 j& |9 E& n不需要更多的语言
紧紧地握着你的手
/ ^( N( J# L0 d& f8 @9 B: v这温暖依旧未改变
我们同欢乐我们同忍受
% q' Z3 G) a& h* O  F* [我们怀着同样的期待
我们同风雨我们共追求
' C" @' v# c( r/ V7 M我们珍存同一样的爱
无论你我可曾相识
无论在眼前在天边
* p' B# `/ x8 f* Z真心地为你祝愿
% V3 X8 s& W* L9 W祝愿你事事平安
2 Q$ I' J6 O# |. F% ]0 m
Let the world full of love
Gently holding your face, I wiped away your tears for you.
My heart always belongs to you; please tell me you do not feel alone anymore.
9 V( u8 l; p- p: r& R' xStaring at your eyes, you have already known my meaning without saying a word.
Tightly holding your hands, the warm of your hands still did not change.
, c, @1 s- e# Z" WWe share our joy with our stand with the same expectations. (?)
7 H/ j( C3 L$ h! [( C1 ~* |We have been face difficulties together and pursing with the same purpose.
/ k. K% E5 t( N1 ~; |& sWe treasure the same love for both you and me.
Whether we know each other or not, whether we have been in the same immediate horizon,
I sincerely wish you are peace .

celina

明天会更好
轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
: n" s$ l/ b0 F0 G4 N  X3 m, Y慢慢张开你的眼睛
5 {3 H. U9 c; S* z7 i  o0 X& G看看忙碌的世界
是否依然孤独的转个不停
+ K5 p/ F* x; g6 K- j春风不解风情
# C. h" ?. y3 i; W吹动少年的心
& s0 ~) w' e4 Q2 {7 A让昨日脸上的泪痕
6 y; S6 A# E8 R  p+ b4 n- L0 Q7 `随记忆风干了
抬头寻找天空的翅膀
9 F8 e/ \3 E. n候鸟出现它的影迹
带来远处的饥荒
. `+ F9 g0 M+ R5 @# W4 H& T无情的战火依然存在的消息
; q0 K6 g. F$ D) T1 Y玉山白雪飘零
燃烧少年的心
5 z3 ~1 P( c# N% p; }使真情溶化成音符
倾诉遥远的祝福
唱出你的热情
6 T7 n( [8 s/ l伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
$ M( N$ b- n/ h让我拥有你真心的面孔
* T* t. n& N; \1 S( B4 @让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
4 J8 x* S; q# P: {% ?谁能不顾自己的家园
$ R8 z: S3 W/ G) w6 |. n+ f, e9 y抛开记忆中的童年
& p+ y4 s& O5 r8 J谁能忍心看那昨日的忧愁
带走我们的笑容
青春不解红尘
: \6 l8 W+ c9 I胭脂沾染了灰
让久违不见的泪水
8 r# \* I' U% V0 {5 }5 z$ ?滋润了你的面容
唱出你的热情
伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
% B1 @- Z1 l; B! P% E# i) E6 V2 |让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
' K: B) x) ~2 w, ]0 G& y9 ]0 Y: s为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
7 p6 x) A4 `& F3 |+ i, y* h% ]轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
! i: u$ @& G3 f6 }: x; k看看忙碌的世界
/ b# h( j, ~1 q( G是否依然孤独的转个不停
5 A' \) l' p: ]! B$ C" \- ~0 R日出唤醒清晨
大地光彩重生
让和风拂出的音响
谱成生命的乐章
# j4 w; u+ D! x, \0 |唱出你的热情
伸出你双手
) F+ H9 g: S+ N; \6 N! I2 E4 ~+ T让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
4 B3 T( R7 l9 X# z; r5 @让我们的笑容
7 o8 |) r' M1 `充满着青春的骄傲
让我们期待明天会更好
Future will be better
I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
7 E9 D4 K) Q1 y4 i6 O" CAnd see the busy world whether the same as before.
' r+ @2 F4 a: d  h* C/ _; c) @8 lI cried because the earthquake destroyed our hometown.
& e+ {  L9 Y& zI looked at the sky and saw the bird flying from my hometown.
It told me the news of the hungry and disaster of Sichuan.
, O5 d7 l1 Q( }, h  R8 eI live in Canada far away; however, I bless my hometown using my songs.
Let’s sing with burning passions.
Let’s shakes our hands with each other. (Let’s get together to overcome the difficulties)
* {9 M$ p5 G# y9 ?, ALet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
1 m3 s9 {2 A) F! |  Z' S! kEveryone loves their hometown with memory of their childhood.
Nobody wants to see the disaster take away our happiness.
$ t8 L# `% ?: nWe got together bravely to overcome every difficulties.
3 k( B& ]6 U. {) s! FLet’s sing with burning passions,
Let’s shakes our hands with each other.
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Let’s have the same dream
Let’s sincerely bless people who suffered in this earthquake.
6 J3 H) g4 |- D8 J/ n: \1 V9 p# ~5 ]I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
. b: U+ B8 _$ QAnd see the busy world whether the same as before.
2 }/ \* W8 b( WI am crying because the news of Sichuan earthquake destroyed my hometown,
However, I know that the sunrise will come finally.
And the mother earth will also renascence after the disaster.
! C- C0 I6 H1 O3 ]+ G1 LEverything will pass and have its new life. (Everything will recovery after the disater)
" \/ A8 ^$ Z& A% q( Q! x# hLet’s sing with burning passions.       
& @* H: r9 [4 j- C- SLet’s shakes our hands with each other.
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Let’s hope future will better.

celina

Please give advice as soon as possible because they need be done before June16.