I am translating for the songs of 枫叶情--重建灾区小学募捐义演

celina

I need help after my second draft.

billzhao

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寒月

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celina

万水千山总是情
& S- {8 `# S9 Z% C  g词:邓伟雄曲:顾嘉辉
' E! ]7 O) c. W% r莫说青山多障碍
9 E( i- A' ~. I风也急风也劲
, X: G  Q- X" k' |5 \$ g1 u白云过山峰也可传情
5 G0 f# {8 P5 ^% V. u莫说水中多变幻
( p+ y# o, o" u) O水也清水也静
9 C3 M; W  |+ c! H! J1 f5 |& j6 m柔情似水爱共永
未怕罡风吹散了热爱
2 T7 K% @3 S. o4 R; f  N, ]万水千山总是情
聚散也有天注定
8 r/ d4 a- [6 u' h9 V3 v不怨天不怨命
但求有山水共作证
There is love everywhere
Option1
Look at the green mountain; however, you can not know it also can be a obstruction.
The wind blow rapidly and strong in order to pass the obstruction and meet the beautiful cloud.
3 B9 z. ~4 K# V! WLook at the peaceful lake; however, you can not know whether there is danger inside.
1 g2 b& O- o6 ?# W  Y0 [9 a: ?However, our love will help us to overcome every difficult to dive and find the treasure.
8 ^- e% s, \1 r/ k) _5 ]  HMaybe some failure will disappoint us.
& K' d8 ?/ F1 z9 w, GHowever, there is love everywhere
9 B. ?, j+ H/ x* v. M; X) ^: hOur love will help us to overcome every difficulty.
It is unpredictable that whether we can get together or not.
We do not worry about too much future.
2 ]% F$ Z5 @4 \, |+ ILet’s just enjoy this moment.

celina

阳光总在风雨后
人生路上甜苦和喜忧
$ A1 K# r3 x# s8 k! `愿与你分担所有
难免曾经跌倒和等候
" x+ [, q9 E' {) ?  w7 u要勇敢的抬头
谁愿常躲在避风的港口
& S0 Z! o3 }! i& ]宁有波涛汹涌的自由
愿是你心中灯塔的守候
在迷雾中让你看透
# K8 O7 ?! q! j8 E& T8 |阳光总在风雨后
乌云上有睛空
# c8 x3 u& r1 W珍惜所有的感动
  r1 ?8 T" J8 P: n0 E1 ~  l) F. h% h每一份希望在你手中
阳光总在风雨后
请相信有彩虹
( h! b# u7 t! X  l2 z: o风风雨雨都接受
8 e+ B) Z; ]2 I6 [% g0 k' h# {; ?4 B我一直会在你的左右
# |9 \7 O. T4 e/ x& d; fThere is always sunshine after raining
! \, P5 I% a2 S' |, UThere are happiness and sadness in life.
  Z3 F& L  ]2 h0 n% B$ vI will share with you everything.
1 p( |+ D9 o& B4 WIt is hard to avoid failure and the process of waiting for success.
* D* H$ U; }+ Y" F  N7 a" m; ^We get together and bravely face them.
Everyone does not want to have a common life,
We prefer to have a challenge like a small boat travels in the sea.
I am willing to be pharos for you to show the right direction in the fog.
There is always sunshine after raining.
$ C2 O9 s9 V( S* y$ I5 tThere is sun above the black cloud.
) F: Z. w8 O) N# T6 q, C5 j) U/ }- J% LPlease cherish every moment you are moved.
* b# J( X( E8 Q9 Z& ~4 ~3 I: NTake chance on every hope.
$ Y0 d2 R( J- B; AThere is always sunshine after raining.
4 t. O- m" d0 F' W5 v4 Q" xWe can just believe that there is rainbow after raining.
3 I. P2 q4 V/ M7 z# hWe will bravely accept every situation and deal with them.
I will always accomplish you in your life.

celina

让世界充满爱

轻轻地捧着你的脸
为你把眼泪擦干
+ w9 Q, a  N0 ]  a这颗心永远属于你
告诉我你不再孤单
- K1 D# o1 W( L+ K: w& B深深地凝望着你的眼
不需要更多的语言
紧紧地握着你的手
% [! E8 F6 h  ?* G* C这温暖依旧未改变
5 z2 C; u, e. T# q! R0 M6 M我们同欢乐我们同忍受
* G$ V$ j) T$ s% P: f' {( M: E我们怀着同样的期待
7 |3 b  J' f& J  m) P4 w7 T. y我们同风雨我们共追求
: w: k; Z1 Q& N0 V3 K6 p; Q# {我们珍存同一样的爱
无论你我可曾相识
无论在眼前在天边
1 B0 B! W  M& Y9 @  i* w& t真心地为你祝愿
祝愿你事事平安

& C7 Q5 ?  ~4 d# {4 s3 a5 iLet the world full of love
' Z% R  v) m- p8 P- G4 z7 P0 CGently holding your face, I wiped away your tears for you.
; z) O- N  F2 q  k+ K* `+ s4 ^My heart always belongs to you; please tell me you do not feel alone anymore.
Staring at your eyes, you have already known my meaning without saying a word.
3 V; w+ \/ n: _. [/ ~Tightly holding your hands, the warm of your hands still did not change.
6 l& ]: l) b) T- FWe share our joy with our stand with the same expectations. (?)
, E& g0 G# B9 c& W+ {& n1 G! J( WWe have been face difficulties together and pursing with the same purpose.
) x9 _2 x; S! I  e2 U2 c: R5 VWe treasure the same love for both you and me.
Whether we know each other or not, whether we have been in the same immediate horizon,
/ p) X1 i$ W6 A: wI sincerely wish you are peace .

celina

明天会更好
轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
) o/ K5 X7 j; L2 d. C! [慢慢张开你的眼睛
& u8 d$ ^) k& P8 O  a看看忙碌的世界
是否依然孤独的转个不停
春风不解风情
吹动少年的心
: V. R3 z( k8 U% n: S让昨日脸上的泪痕
8 k8 R8 m7 K4 S" o( S8 g$ m随记忆风干了
. [3 B' W* ^. o  ]0 ~4 a! [抬头寻找天空的翅膀
候鸟出现它的影迹
$ J5 e/ z$ B$ Z, b0 B5 E: r带来远处的饥荒
无情的战火依然存在的消息
3 m% N) v* O# V% ]: B玉山白雪飘零
燃烧少年的心
2 w/ r9 E* S# R, }1 k# k) f0 _使真情溶化成音符
倾诉遥远的祝福
唱出你的热情
: ^( x/ [, y5 d, @) u! p- x伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
- i& _9 W% Y5 X, h3 P& n9 [让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
$ h8 A; V2 a' ^充满着青春的骄傲
为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
谁能不顾自己的家园
6 e# J# G( `- W抛开记忆中的童年
0 ^# |+ f- R7 b1 p( g" N谁能忍心看那昨日的忧愁
& S: [  o( R; d1 \! E# ?带走我们的笑容
8 k8 d6 i+ E! V) x& T2 v青春不解红尘
, A& b1 o0 [: v  p* R胭脂沾染了灰
, O) j5 _$ {. [让久违不见的泪水
$ i: n: o  t3 j  h! d滋润了你的面容
唱出你的热情
4 n7 W8 v" C  m' M$ I/ t+ ~+ c伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
$ c3 ~3 n0 D' q. ?1 |0 h让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
) B0 U2 T9 V" K0 h  x4 D为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
0 s* w' U5 j1 ~; q$ M8 O慢慢张开你的眼睛
6 \# R+ F3 W  ~1 b, t/ Q% o$ ], F看看忙碌的世界
& ?) F( L  f) C9 g是否依然孤独的转个不停
日出唤醒清晨
大地光彩重生
让和风拂出的音响
谱成生命的乐章
' N$ x/ V6 E' C8 p$ B+ B1 V) \$ }. ^唱出你的热情
伸出你双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
让我们期待明天会更好
' j, l- Q: o  C; K% t) t4 u  EFuture will be better
I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
And see the busy world whether the same as before.
# z& R2 ]; H4 `1 X3 mI cried because the earthquake destroyed our hometown.
. p* @( J3 \5 K- {# E4 jI looked at the sky and saw the bird flying from my hometown.
; z6 D0 w+ s/ ?8 ~2 |  _$ t2 sIt told me the news of the hungry and disaster of Sichuan.
I live in Canada far away; however, I bless my hometown using my songs.
Let’s sing with burning passions.
Let’s shakes our hands with each other. (Let’s get together to overcome the difficulties)
) m$ x) d/ X; `1 oLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
% @3 g0 h; _+ Q9 B6 C2 y6 yEveryone loves their hometown with memory of their childhood.
6 U" p5 ^' ~; f- l. T& cNobody wants to see the disaster take away our happiness.
* O0 u3 M+ L' {5 k6 yWe got together bravely to overcome every difficulties.
" L. K6 ?/ F' l7 ]Let’s sing with burning passions,
Let’s shakes our hands with each other.
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Let’s have the same dream
) b: t2 D' m: q: rLet’s sincerely bless people who suffered in this earthquake.
8 [' q. y* F/ T. }: O+ {' mI woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
And see the busy world whether the same as before.
I am crying because the news of Sichuan earthquake destroyed my hometown,
/ g8 M5 \, l* eHowever, I know that the sunrise will come finally.
- f5 b3 D' O# ^- u2 P And the mother earth will also renascence after the disaster.
Everything will pass and have its new life. (Everything will recovery after the disater)
Let’s sing with burning passions.       
* `7 }5 k9 F8 pLet’s shakes our hands with each other.
; u$ o) K( p: YLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
% q; y8 Q, r" U% ALet’s hope future will better.

celina

Please give advice as soon as possible because they need be done before June16.