TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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! q  G% W6 h% p8 r3 t(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)


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8 S. H0 L- `+ R8 O: r(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
0 H) h9 E' h* n4 }) B% UThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
+ M( u1 A2 u5 h+ _& i2 zWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
) N% P; Z% p8 C1 {5 r" E8 X) b  BFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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! U1 G. [9 S. Z7 j, Y. `; S: c2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
3 g5 d$ E# V. r% r: V, a3 e4 sFor A, A 的一个优势
& T' D# ^: v) F0 C4 b+ O& fWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
" s* E' M' O5 ]moreover, B的优点2,for example…
7 O8 C+ S6 B3 e/ H  o: oFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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' F4 R9 U- b! o; l/ Z(二)单一观点式
3 o+ {' x. p% h8 a- M9 f- {2 d  X4 e1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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& J- r! I" V9 v2 r7 `4 Z首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
* f7 d& Y9 q/ @3 G: ZAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
" |1 |# ?' l, T/ N: w5 dBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)


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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
/ K' y; j# D2 a& E2 ?' D, oA is superior in another way, this is…
% ^. K8 T$ o1 @It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
& A/ }1 d' w3 ^% C7 A, PFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型


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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
2 U" b6 O, x1 S7 hThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
$ @" A" |+ c. w: q, m2 wC is superior in another way, this is…
6 @* x/ O4 V9 b9 N) sFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)




(四)原因解释型
* e' v6 X" V" A, _2 e1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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. P9 W1 W0 }/ g9 v; }& D0 ?2 f陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
$ c8 @5 ~. y" n2 h3 F1 ]XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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) W5 u! ^% u" J& f7 y. A6 @One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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In addition/ furthermore
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3 r" f; u! w3 ^/ k: sIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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4 I8 i! x9 R  d* d; ][ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]