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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
0 _* `# ~2 W8 [+ i/ z' _1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) , {- W& G/ q% Y6 f
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) H2 b  o, D. l( H8 N: l+ ?(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
: G# u" C6 }- c# `2 gThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… 3 V, h6 u. C$ K0 g
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 6 |1 B. {) w) F  e
A is superior in another way, this is… $ M7 K. R/ \) V! I" p! c1 f
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 1 \' y+ `& U, I/ @5 q, w6 {
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... . ^5 |1 f8 L* z# i* q* Q) E3 U0 G* f
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. ! n# S8 T# ^9 a/ C
For A, A 的一个优势 # @; a6 i- p5 f6 S: n; g3 U# \" A
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, % s' [! O$ f& a# _
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
# |5 C1 R& F. h9 n; }( P# A. j. Gon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… 7 P( q3 h3 b8 R$ b; W; g
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
) z- n! ?6 [0 o$ u! n0 lFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
2 \1 \: B, U+ D' h* {6 v  z: w* Z1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. " M0 q. W" L& D% i' _
There is no denying that… 3 U. q1 [1 q5 D) T1 x: F6 Y
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
( W' G5 }! ^  C/ K3 T$ z0 nFinally,…
* x( x9 M/ Y, e0 b. Q2 vBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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$ K6 k( c4 G* n, u8 ]# v2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
( Q1 Y# `* k- C4 a(本类型只agree) , O1 ]. O; [2 y3 E7 C0 O7 \; Z/ G, F
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
3 n# q1 |9 y: ^1 {' B( w0 q4 j* {/ zThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……   r% `! V5 a9 o
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 7 v0 {$ M* ]# ~, ]9 e" B4 Z0 g
A is superior in another way, this is… % W) T4 V" A- x9 u
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… , t6 h. s! g! G. b4 R0 T4 J
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... $ A7 S1 _; |8 c2 r
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
6 {; @8 D1 Y0 P  Y- O, ?" JWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
9 J; p; u: g8 z* `- d! UThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
: w1 ^6 W  h- BWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… 1 c* Z" A0 a1 a2 F  S/ C9 m
C is superior in another way, this is… 9 C0 V* o; S+ H! A
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C ' A% r+ z( g5 [! n! V% u/ Y
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. * i$ R; r3 o3 N  C; n/ Y3 ], M& Z8 {
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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7 u- w8 l1 v$ k3 y* B7 m(四)原因解释型
6 u( M+ |! v# W1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
! W) X9 t8 T3 Z( u* qAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. ' [4 p9 f8 O2 t- c( w
One of the primary causes is that…
. z8 l0 R8 e, a! p; |2 w, i; IXXX also results from… # Y5 E( m4 X* `
… is responsible for xxx, as well. 2 ]+ o; m* b7 V, d& i
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX 9 n$ A. m: q( |  ]6 Z8 q" j4 _. n
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2 a* u, C# ?+ c; |+ h% g& B2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something. " X* T* i2 }. D& t
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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" |. n" p: A' ~- D9 eOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
2 P/ D- P3 c% V/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… / Q6 d9 j; a5 [) n9 U% _
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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+ W2 i$ N" |" \7 da more subtle point which we must consider is that… 9 f$ n2 C) v  o$ L' k# V* {
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% R/ o6 [+ v! pIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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