TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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$ J; F+ O; h+ p7 G* }$ i$ @  Y(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
, l- j5 x5 h5 E* V' uThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
& k7 V$ }1 ^$ R" `8 t* N" X: {0 \  F9 jWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
4 Z0 ]; j: u  I$ d/ _/ m  _% ZA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
6 r6 Q& Z: {# [1 Q6 \: ?5 _+ JFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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1 n- S' A: Y. _2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
3 h* H0 Z% F" u' bWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
: Q: r/ }) e2 ^4 N9 h8 U+ K4 zmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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, s. l3 p8 d6 C1 m: J! h+ W(二)单一观点式
% q6 G  U- s' |3 |1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)



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: E( T8 X- E/ w3 ~After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
4 O7 j4 V/ U. v5 w* DFinally,…
7 Y8 B- r& `/ t* O0 w/ qBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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0 B) J, _7 u) B(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
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A is superior in another way, this is…
: F1 e9 a( x/ I1 i$ K, cIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
# W2 e- [) s, H+ TFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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' ]5 d6 i; `9 m0 K4 RThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
2 w$ F+ v2 i/ w+ k( TThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
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C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
, \5 l$ s: Y4 K; XFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
( t8 L! D& t, y+ u1 l; ~(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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7 R" _3 M2 j& S3 T陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
* w8 U; H% l+ z- m/ p0 {… is responsible for xxx, as well.
. Z1 ~  P/ Z8 X6 t/ [$ ETo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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  t$ u; \( ]' M8 d3 x' }2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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+ S6 s6 h+ h. G8 Y3 J6 L  FOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
% D/ b$ H! k$ G. i3 N- a: r9 \4 s/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore

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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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$ Z$ A8 o& d# O. h再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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