TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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  p/ `# S% h$ `& M& N, i(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)


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: [8 B% q  d. Y, @, H(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
1 r, o3 c- q% Z& z4 P* n2 P7 N: lIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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* D4 z, T4 M; H2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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' M0 R7 C7 ^. X7 k1 F+ ^3 |& ]0 KTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
* i6 G. g( k2 w: E/ yWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
% i6 y+ ~$ j: [7 [2 X4 Gon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
1 d! D' B' d) Gmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.


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* C0 ]. [3 E9 h5 B6 j2 ~2 G(二)单一观点式
' a7 l) v3 j# n0 @. b; t1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
7 D; z# ~- P; b' l6 g' }/ OAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
' E( `7 R4 `, w1 ?! \8 D; }( A% i) qThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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) o* a. Z; O, K２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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4 p3 Q( W0 ?: O" X3 Y$ \( t(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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2 y7 c3 |/ j/ \5 y# B$ {It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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  \$ H+ j' ~& \0 K4 e5 k0 f( kThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
  w' _3 D, D- t" [, xWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
) ]; C* U/ m2 K) B$ [- M3 iThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
' k1 x. ?7 c; e% X9 kWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
0 \' c2 b+ F( x# q7 X. bC is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
3 J0 c  h# ^8 ^7 h/ P0 x: KFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)



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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
8 ]2 p$ \* h( g* ], nXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.


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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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( ~5 ?4 M) T; r7 lOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
3 K; l; B/ q- l4 B& F! O) I7 M/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…



8 c0 Z, ^* _+ b5 na more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore

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, m1 b5 M* e5 `/ |# S: JIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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* h3 y$ l+ @9 p再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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