TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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, a* p8 o% b4 a9 R% K9 `  J* _& Y(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
9 k( Y+ v4 O7 I2 R' B% y# ?What is also worth noticing fact is that……
$ ]! W1 M6 i9 C. w, gA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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9 Z7 N+ C& K5 H, `) l% [2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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* H  A8 f1 `8 j! m: `( ^' _To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
$ B& a1 H- f8 f" R. EFor A, A 的一个优势
3 `/ p* C% W! F4 OWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
( K6 u/ T4 L6 b% a& E, Von the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
8 U5 I/ x8 \$ G; y6 N2 ?moreover, B的优点2,for example…
+ O3 [& _# I* ?5 c  AFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
$ B* K, i" E6 i! v' C! w1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
0 `9 O2 }3 ?1 t5 }9 E4 y* lAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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( e0 G' Y6 d! n5 E5 V: Z0 l２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
$ R  X- s9 d+ [The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
  J3 D( \2 A: S3 v4 |What is also worth noticing fact is that……
: ~4 V' J& f* S& q6 ZA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...




(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型


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5 k! p" S" g9 T+ j( ?There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
. N$ J9 J% }7 k5 `/ V8 A5 vWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
1 e9 v8 _; J/ ^3 ]9 NThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
4 s& }. b- U" tWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
7 J  H  K9 {9 o$ o% J( RFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)




2 _2 p, j# i4 D# `3 s+ B/ H(四)原因解释型
' m2 ]/ I# j) A( E0 @4 c1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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陈述这个事实
2 A( w  g9 i9 }  pAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
+ W) F6 q4 p0 C2 D+ VXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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6 _! P8 l+ k4 ?4 W' ^) V' h3 B2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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# P3 u, z% B! L2 o$ b6 rOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
0 `0 |& G6 Q: h# \4 g/ p/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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6 d; V/ c' _1 {1 k! o+ ]: R2 K( f9 za more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore



2 d" r* T, F- v6 S+ I7 @' wIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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1 u) e. }3 }: M4 x/ i6 Y% \3 \1 X[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]