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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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TWE作文模板汇粹
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1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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% @+ ]) L' P# ]9 T* V7 l/ y(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
) b( f7 B: j# Z( h: S9 v: SThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… - T" n. C4 \4 f" b
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… & |$ c3 R7 e/ V. e6 ]
A is superior in another way, this is…
  C( R& d6 O6 q0 G! @It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 5 u! S6 k! j& W0 U3 @; @6 M
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... ; [# C2 U1 J, v- c/ |
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) 4 C5 i: ?- a9 d$ ^* W

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
8 F4 C; ]7 r3 z6 U$ x8 yFor A, A 的一个优势
% o0 h3 Z, v: p! s0 P3 E8 u. cWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, 3 B" E; `# ~2 W
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... ( ]/ ]/ Q! I- P8 X
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… 6 g4 }6 I! p2 Q/ W7 V
moreover, B的优点2,for example… * i* n! C7 g6 Y8 ?+ X
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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6 g/ T3 d+ |# ]$ A) ](二)单一观点式 * }+ V* w. K  \1 e
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) 2 ^% a! D1 ?# @; |2 Y

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
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There is no denying that…
7 `' z6 k" X0 z6 t- _Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… : u6 n8 ]5 \2 y/ g1 m6 g. q
Finally,…
/ d" M% U7 G4 |2 Q8 b: h& QBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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$ n2 n2 t0 {: X4 K& w2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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4 m( n0 G/ [3 [* z, I  U* R1 L6 P(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. ; b9 o5 a* O# u3 v& v( O3 \% a
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
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A is superior in another way, this is… 1 b% p% f" }0 @! L
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… . L4 w' E& o% k/ K! H
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... / C6 \2 e* G5 h' |

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/ g3 R; |% s( Y  w(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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2 _6 B( r* T2 z7 i1 PThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. # Q. k* u4 G% `3 p( B- S
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
7 F/ [4 M) x' e; R2 {  HThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
# F, f1 y& O) b, X* I- B+ D* a( bWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… 2 s( s4 S  o1 X2 E: c# P6 ~
C is superior in another way, this is… # G* v* S% k% Z9 x5 f: f/ P7 l# B5 C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
8 \% g  I& B) }! c# Y3 d# k" S: fFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
% \0 H6 C% s# r7 {1 ](In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) 2 Y9 B4 G6 _9 g1 T# f- g: w

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(四)原因解释型
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5 @( k0 Y1 h4 a# C+ F) tAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. 3 b4 }) `- h6 c. V. W0 h
One of the primary causes is that… - s8 j& J8 `1 J- O6 u, d# }
XXX also results from…
4 T0 b' I, m5 G" D+ }& C/ l… is responsible for xxx, as well. " Q( t' b3 ]  d/ n9 W! X6 B
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX 5 K& S1 i5 p$ H) q6 j0 m- z

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) x) _- _9 K6 h7 G7 U0 B2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. ( Z$ i' f( E. d+ l, J
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  T0 Y% W# B5 g8 [& zOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…   T8 p8 s! d# _2 k; J7 v
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
: i2 U& |) N$ O9 j/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that… , e  J8 ]" I4 B& E" c3 h7 d
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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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4 q: h2 }- t, l再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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