TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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' _/ L- v' l* {& t8 l(一) 对立观点式
; S1 e$ |- [/ c; S' f1 P1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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  l- Z$ z9 h: D  x: ~(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
4 }* F) O' I' H9 f) _1 w8 D0 yThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
7 |2 g. v5 s7 p& e6 a& zWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
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It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
; J9 s9 s0 x- o" k& V% m: vFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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0 b5 U% t% N, A- N! j2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)


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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
6 _# c0 ?1 b5 }  y* cFor A, A 的一个优势
1 @1 [" f! ?0 o# t; p3 @Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
% T7 Q/ _! x& h* V/ a2 kmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
+ b1 O! o" `/ h% Y9 x3 tFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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(二)单一观点式
! a5 [* }4 O! \; \' Z9 t1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
3 s) I- h% o$ F! }0 X3 ZThere is no denying that…
0 U9 x: q2 g9 E( A: h+ |2 k/ ]Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
% a  s/ z5 B8 J8 w1 x7 O# uBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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1 K' C& ]" J# G/ [( R２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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- B- ^# U9 G# _(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
* ?/ J4 P$ t! A. {& c# |The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
0 c* |, S; F% `, l' n* s2 VWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
) c! H5 o/ Q" P8 c3 j% {5 s8 sFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.


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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
0 _+ i) n" y  ^3 s. aOne of the primary causes is that…
' T$ J5 K0 M+ M" a# Z0 l7 XXXX also results from…
9 J  C. H! j% M8 n/ z… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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8 a! B  u! M2 A& f: q3 HThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
0 t; p: o5 h: Q/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…


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In addition/ furthermore


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# [  h" X7 @: p, AIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

0 ?1 V6 X8 B+ C/ y5 d再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

0 }5 N( X% ^+ e3 f[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]