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I just wrote a poem/ Y/ h K! v8 f! H& D, ]+ a# @6 u
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
" `2 z0 ^. g: N3 J5 U8 gHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem: _& x* Y! x* m j0 M
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you + ]$ h: e5 j3 A* J% S' j
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
8 u8 z: Y; S- r; A1 g0 t Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
: a0 b4 ]9 K2 V& e Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
' `7 z5 p, r0 T: l% K6 ?" A4 X Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
# m$ S4 {6 M- N9 V6 `% Q Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
) R5 q& C4 A+ @! a0 C* a5 s5 z% D5 FHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
) q9 V& v, E0 _: a, v, b1 f somehow I realized you were still in my heart & B/ w. P. t7 g* w" {
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness7 E1 R# J# ?! S( @
somehow I lost myself inside again - y- @5 h; l& d8 ~
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
0 I0 Y% c+ B2 ?2 U+ M8 q. {. Z somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion4 v) f, J; W$ y4 [3 k
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................" L8 v1 s. Q; d8 {6 ~7 {1 r
Basically, I almost finish this poem
5 `* N: f1 K* G9 |! ]" a$ ` I am 一个人de精彩- E% r. f7 N% H g* T8 V
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.) g0 M; X) g4 i/ n- [
But........
1 t% i0 o a" a9 GIronically? Isn't it? |
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