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I just wrote a poem
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8 j, Z; b, k8 ]2 [. n' GHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem+ Q. _8 ~. d: u) A, M$ V
Thanks a lot!!!& c' F+ C9 O3 ]3 v
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
( h8 V2 h% N0 E; f1 ? [) J) @ Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
! f; j/ |- i9 Y3 e Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
) f% g% e( g5 H2 d) M Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ! F9 b) E, ~# z
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
( b; G; N2 O4 G& D Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 8 w4 j5 K7 |4 F" _: f( h' y
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
8 c; k& M8 w8 }* V- Q( `; C9 _7 j somehow I realized you were still in my heart
9 Y: m3 E$ |; M5 O" B0 h+ c somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness) l+ {* ^9 @6 ~1 C1 v% P% O1 H
somehow I lost myself inside again # O" w2 a! C; Y$ i; G0 i4 q! B; i2 C8 T
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
% B7 j3 i5 R n( O7 a- O% R somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
6 |3 D6 o3 `2 E# }+ h: a0 ?) ]Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
# C5 S D6 a/ I; K, `9 Z1 ^Basically, I almost finish this poem3 w" x+ ~; i4 P- N/ ]0 i
I am 一个人de精彩; s W" J5 _: }4 n$ p! k2 t* d5 }
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
