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I just wrote a poem8 r: T$ z7 W% ?
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.$ F' L& \1 e* s& @, ^
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem9 l. \- V3 b$ W' y# O6 {
Thanks a lot!!!9 ^- ~1 E' l1 }" ], r
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you * o: j# x! X3 e9 b; r9 K, Y
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
1 R P/ K! I1 q% M, T' Y# E5 } Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
- c6 @7 O) Y8 G2 A3 N2 P% A' t Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 0 b* C- c3 E$ c
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind * M P, H# P* ~' U
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness & v I0 \9 p8 j8 g. J, M6 D
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
- x; v+ n% r; H z% L T+ a0 u8 [ somehow I realized you were still in my heart
0 C' d3 g/ w! g somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
! e' n) F" Z6 b/ N2 Q: \8 e somehow I lost myself inside again . t6 [' [: M5 y/ e
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 7 U3 s; \+ P0 O) K; k9 c
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion( ?6 N& p* N; |1 ]! f
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................' T1 g b2 X- }/ J( `
Basically, I almost finish this poem! L. ?2 }" ?3 o& @) X
I am 一个人de精彩
9 ]7 R, S+ v' C5 p8 b I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything." E/ {. y0 i. i
But........
/ ]1 n" s- s2 b' n* QIronically? Isn't it? |
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