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I just wrote a poem; S5 [; {% k. [$ a' b! Q
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.! W C& e8 T8 y6 p
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
( k7 c; Q. S+ j& C5 I/ jThanks a lot!!!# S8 f+ S( _+ g* E8 C7 H' D
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
* q5 P! ~. r3 V/ m2 V, O- k Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
. p, c5 n8 R2 A% U$ } Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
6 ?8 q, J0 x( k% X3 E- g' H4 n Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
, Q2 h6 ~- I7 X, z: H/ f/ q Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
+ ]. R) T- T9 r" a7 O Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness # x; I; h6 d4 }
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 2 Y+ d# ]8 ?# z8 _
somehow I realized you were still in my heart 5 q5 @' Y" i: _8 b& q
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
1 e! u! S" a+ i. N5 k# j' H. G somehow I lost myself inside again 4 K. Q( Y5 V! `! I5 v
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog : d W M! V2 E( x9 [
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion; p' e- C/ R3 y, `* H
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you....................................... p$ c! o2 n; s* i7 V+ R n
Basically, I almost finish this poem
% z1 n( j( c# F" L* }% d I am 一个人de精彩
1 }- f# U+ c6 G) h# Q I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.' J- O- X, W& H$ ~$ b9 _
But........
1 w0 M0 Q6 n9 D B' tIronically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
