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I just wrote a poem
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. k: W f" P/ K G8 } k2 pHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
; h, S/ p* X8 P; TThanks a lot!!!$ i Q8 B1 d$ A* Z
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/ g4 j9 H* I1 E: q1 HFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 3 i* L8 P" W' N& s0 C6 [5 A8 K y
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
! h/ `1 v% V$ P9 L% p Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
# a w7 u. s! q Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 6 p* k) w5 i' c2 v3 k
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
6 L# {& E: n- c8 ~, u- h Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
4 B! Z" H" J, {* P0 aHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday - j2 u: `, O1 N; b$ D, R& `
somehow I realized you were still in my heart & R" Q1 N6 o5 G; E1 c! d
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness* N$ _9 T) n z `8 {0 R9 T, a
somehow I lost myself inside again ; U4 z a- V1 }. U$ u" W* j- p0 h
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 1 G$ `0 A- j; m+ d% Q6 ^ i
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
9 E/ U6 i0 x* I+ A- @Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................) a/ z5 l4 s S6 @2 ]
Basically, I almost finish this poem1 e3 }3 I6 W/ @- l7 h4 _
I am 一个人de精彩
7 ?* {1 u" z' I I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-17 21:16
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
